Ashleigh Brown

Thanks for the points! I still love your story of course, but I felt like this was kind of rushed because it switches scenes so fast a couple times. Maybe ...

Hi its me again and I read the rest of the story that you added, which is still great. I read them together and only saw one mistake that jumped ...

Wow!! Gosh. That was what i was thinking the whole time. Can he see dead people? Yeah, but I like the way you opened it up, and it didn't begin ...

I really liked this, even though it was not what I expected. I expected it to be like a six people lover affair...what was I thinking. Lol. Even though I ...

Hi...this is my fist time reading some of you work, and I enjoyed it. I went back and read the 1st and 2nd one, then this. I really like the ...

Hi I really liked it and noticed you added some more and its still good. Anyway I like the story line and I enjoy reading it. Also there's not a ...

That was really good when I first looked at it I thought this is a long one, but I read it and I couldn't stop. The way you describe everything ...

“Don’t sweet it ill be back later cya,” don't sweet it I think you meant don't sweat it. Also there is another error when you put of twice and it ...

Hi you review mine all the time now its time for me to review you. Except I have this weakness for really good stories, and I end up not looking ...

Gosh.... if only I could write like that. :) I loved it and I felt as if I was in my room reading a book. I reallyyyy think that you ...

Wooooowwww!!! Can you say greatness, this piece was incredible. I tried to look for errors but didn't succeed, because this was exquisite. I love how you kept the suspense increasing ...

Once again you have another amazing entry, no doubt about it that you'll win. I really enjoyed this one, but there was one thing i didn't like. When you put ...

This was pretty good, and there wasn't a lot of things that needed to be changed. I feel though you should add a little more detail to draw the reader ...